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November 15, 2012
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AT: Revenge by kakashisgirlfighter AT: Revenge by kakashisgirlfighter
This is my half of an art trade with :icongeekgirl8: she asked to do a picture of Mikuru and Asmodeus fighting each other (plus, this is payback in Mikru's head). I try to make it look epic as I can, since I need more practices with fighting scenes. Plus, her arm looks weird, I can't believe I messed that up...drawing AMsodeus in his snake form was funny, I think it look better than the last time I did it. Then again, I do need to draw animals more.
I hope you like it^^

Mikuru (C) *kakashisgirlfighter

Asmodeus (C) *geekgirl8
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Before I start this critique I want to ask one very important question. Do you use circles and stick figures as the base of you drawings? If you don't I would definitely suggest that.

Her action motion doesn't seem smooth or natural. Action poses are difficult. To help improve your poses I would suggest you ask a friend or sibling to pose for you. Take a few reference pics with your camera and work from those. This way you can see the way the body naturally flows. I read somewhere that the body is like dominoes stacked in a line. If you knock one over they all fall into place. Well, with the body if you move one limb in one direction the body will move elsewhere to make it feel natural. If that makes sense. (The book explained it SO much better.) =D

I noticed that you made her clothes and hair kind of move with her action. Which is really good. That helps add a lot to the drawing. You also did a good job at adding shading to this. This gives the drawing depth. Although it doesn't look like you picked a certain light source.

I hope my critique was helpful. I try really hard to give an honest and professional opinion. I hope you don't mind. Keep DRAWING!!!
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please please pay attention to your lines of tangencies. specially with the left arm sword. it looks like shes stabbing her self in the face. i like the concept though.
kakashisgirlfighter Nov 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
oh I will, thanks^^
i see good things see. go for it and get better
kakashisgirlfighter Nov 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I will^^ thanks^^
JustHannahful Nov 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Awesome work, as usual!! :D
kakashisgirlfighter Nov 18, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
thank as always^^
Arai-X Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah more of mikuru!!

I like very much the drawing :heart:
kakashisgirlfighter Nov 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Kell0x Nov 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Love the pose and the action pose here.
kakashisgirlfighter Nov 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
really? thanks^^
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