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Summertime is Fireworks

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A picture for the 4th of July, yeah, I had a fun drawing the yukata or kimono. I was thinking what kinda of pattern so I went flowers. It was fun using my markers for the fireworks. I had to look some pictures up to get an idea how I should draw them. I have to say, it was cool how it came out.


Art and Character; Mikuru (C) *kakashisgirlfighter
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Well...
This is all my opinion. I like the fireworks, they are very vibrant. The neck, however, seems too thick. It's big at the top, then becomes a tad smaller when it comes down. It's kind of hard for me to describe, but if you look at other anime necks, they will be different.
I like the pattern on the kimono, but I think they should be evenly placed, and not scattered. The coloring on the kimono could have darker shadings. (Don't worry, I am very bad at shading and hands, so don't listen to me! Haha)
But otherwise, I like the picture! Keep improving your drawing abilities. Maybe the next picture you create can have a nice background. I hope I wasn't too mean. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>